something pretty

By Magdalena



he was just a glimpse in her slightly tainted view 
her pill box begged for release and she shoved it deeper 
she wants a mountain top romance without the fucked up rules 
that make her close down every cell wanting to reach out, to him 

if she could put herself under his skin without feeling guilt torn 
without feeling every fucking precept clawing at her conscious 
she would unzip his lost world and crawl inside the empty space 
he would feel her before he knew she was there and he'd die to keep her..

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Copyright 2017 Magdalena
Published on Monday, March 20, 2017.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

January 2017
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  • Kaiser Black On Tuesday, March 21, 2017, Kaiser Black (675)By person wrote:

    That was beautiful. Hearing you reciting it made it even more amazing. I've never seen it done that way. Look forward to reading and hearing more of your writing.

  • Magdalena On Wednesday, March 22, 2017, Magdalena (918)By person wrote:

    Thank you, that means a lot, especially as I enjoy reading my work and creating the videos. I am always learning with regards to those. :)


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