Comments by River Lily
- "This was amazing such a perfectly in tune flow of words, with an emotionally charged pen..beautifully written."
Posted by River Lily on "Frames" by Rag-a-muffin
- ""We gave the devil matches; then invited him to stay" loved the repetition and these lines...your a master at structured writing and I bow to you for this...Wishes I could keep everything in perfect flow as you do. Great write dwells"
Posted by River Lily on "It Burns (villanelle in monorhyme)" by dwells