To You: An Open Letter

By Salty Ships

It is 
my being
and bones
what I harbor for you. 

It is
the home of lights
and the wine of wind
what I harbor for you. 

It is
and rage of the storms
what I harbor for you.


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Copyright 2015 Salty Ships
Published on Wednesday, May 13, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Tuesday, June 2, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm (1712)By person wrote:

    Gentle and romantic, while promising a storm. Nice work! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • my soul whispers On Thursday, May 14, 2015, my soul whispers (6)By person wrote:

    I like how the cadence changes in the fourth stanza by splitting "It is" into two lines. To me it gives it a very clipped rhythm...almost as if the speaker is resigned.

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Wednesday, May 13, 2015, Intoxicating Delirium (420)By person wrote:

    I love the way this reads, so choppy, like the sea.. Which is pretty freaking cool, haha.. Great write, I love this:)

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