Gated Desires

By midnights voice

I gate desires

Like veins does blood

As my temptress

Bolds my love

Cheeks talk white

Tongues see thin

I kiss the dreams

And plush my sins

The seven truths

A bridge to burn

I kiss your soil

I parch your fern

I steal your breath

And amp your light

I'm shadow between

Silk and night

I am the art

Within your book

I am the castle

To your rook

The calyx face

So bee Devine

I make honey

One kiss a time

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Copyright 2017 midnights voice
Published on Monday, June 19, 2017.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Drea On Monday, June 19, 2017, Drea (1283)By person wrote:

    Each line spoke louder and louder. They rolled off the tongue quite nicely. I agree with Lyn, from beginning to end this captured my attention.

  • midnights voice On Monday, June 19, 2017, midnights voice (572)By person wrote:

    Thank you Drea for reading and leaving a wonderful comment .

  • Kaiser Black On Monday, June 19, 2017, Kaiser Black (1238)By person wrote:

    "I make honey one kiss at a time" a perfect way to end this. Well done.

  • midnights voice On Monday, June 19, 2017, midnights voice (572)By person wrote:

    Thank you Kaiser Black for reading .

  • Devil lyn On Monday, June 19, 2017, Devil lyn (405)By person wrote:

    Such a buffet of contrasts in so little words: I was ensnared from the beginning to the end. Impressive ink!

  • midnights voice On Monday, June 19, 2017, midnights voice (572)By person wrote:

    Thank you Devil lyn for reading . I liked your comment very much .

  • Devil lyn On Monday, June 19, 2017, Devil lyn (405)By person wrote:

    You`re quite welcome, MV:)

  • Bornfrompain On Monday, June 19, 2017, Bornfrompain (417)By person wrote:

    I liked this a lot! - BFP

  • midnights voice On Monday, June 19, 2017, midnights voice (572)By person wrote:

    Thank you Bornfrompain for reading .

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