Sunset of my Heart

By midnights voice

Sunset of my Heart

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Let love's sunset into my heart
with sullen greys tinged in pink
with last rays of warmth
before there comes the chill


Let the last breath of fulfillness
ease around my heart and
take away the sunny memories softly
as the light fades away


Fading fast empty embraces and
kisses that have no taste
as softly whispered "I love you"
fall into the Atlantic sea


Come nightnness . . .
surround my empty heart
console my ache with care
so come now , sunset of my heart

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Copyright 2017 midnights voice
Published on Tuesday, August 8, 2017.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • dwells On Wednesday, August 16, 2017, dwells (5491)By person wrote:

    Reminiscence of a life well-lived with few regrets I'd guess MV. Lovely thoughts after a sumptuous meal. Check please! and cheers my friend - Dan (where's the dessert? :)

  • midnights voice On Tuesday, August 22, 2017, midnights voice (570)By person wrote:

    Thank you Dan for your comment . I appreciate your visit .

  • Wednesday Addams On Thursday, August 10, 2017, Wednesday Addams (173)By person wrote:

    The heart must beat on,on, on, and on especially when it is at its darkest. It doesn't seem to care what we think.

  • midnights voice On Thursday, August 10, 2017, midnights voice (570)By person wrote:

    Thank you Wednesday for your wisdom .

  • Kaiser Black On Wednesday, August 9, 2017, Kaiser Black (1404)By person wrote:

    Beautiful stuff here MV. A somber tale of love and all the memories it leaves behind once it's gone. Well written.

  • midnights voice On Wednesday, August 9, 2017, midnights voice (570)By person wrote:

    Thank you Kaiser Black for reading and commenting .

  • Jerry stiles On Wednesday, August 9, 2017, Jerry stiles (347)By person wrote:

    Great write sir,,,keep them coming,,

  • midnights voice On Wednesday, August 9, 2017, midnights voice (570)By person wrote:

    Thank you Jerry for reading .

  • worm On Wednesday, August 9, 2017, worm (1552)By person wrote:

    a powerful and poignant piece, MV! this perfectly describes the dying embers of a love lost... Kudos! ~worm~

  • midnights voice On Wednesday, August 9, 2017, midnights voice (570)By person wrote:

    Thank you worm for reading .

  • tmanzano On Tuesday, August 8, 2017, tmanzano (132)By person wrote:

    I really like this on many levels. It conveys a calm and peace to a weary soul. The seemingly serene rhythms written in beguiled me into a false sense of contentment. ...but, If I have read this correctly, it seems someone is taking their one life gratefully. enjoyed this immensely. Well done.

  • midnights voice On Tuesday, August 8, 2017, midnights voice (570)By person wrote:

    Thank you tmanzano for your exceptional comment .

  • Bornfrompain On Tuesday, August 8, 2017, Bornfrompain (511)By person wrote:

    This was absolutely exceptional!! Well penned!!! - BFP

  • midnights voice On Tuesday, August 8, 2017, midnights voice (570)By person wrote:

    Thank you Bornfrompain for reading .

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