I wonder...

By CraveThePain

Sometimes I wonder.

Is he still there?

Did I burn a memory into his mind?

Do his lips still search for mine

Blindly in the darkness?

Or has my hollow silence finally numbed the wound?

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Copyright 2017 CraveThePain
Published on Thursday, August 10, 2017.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Wednesday Addams On Saturday, August 19, 2017, Wednesday Addams (174)By person wrote:

    Sounds like there is much pain on both sides.

  • carlosjackal On Friday, August 11, 2017, carlosjackal (2127)By person wrote:

    I concur with everyone else here: You've captured so much with so little. Welcome To DP!

  • CraveThePain On Friday, August 11, 2017, CraveThePain (18)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much!

  • veingo On Friday, August 11, 2017, veingo (572)By person wrote:

    I don't read much these days. But I'm glad that I read this. Welcome to the Valley. ^V^

  • CraveThePain On Friday, August 11, 2017, CraveThePain (18)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much!

  • tmanzano On Thursday, August 10, 2017, tmanzano (134)By person wrote:

    Effective, tight, powerful... enjoyed.

  • CraveThePain On Friday, August 11, 2017, CraveThePain (18)By person wrote:

    Thank you!

  • A former member wrote: Great poem.

  • CraveThePain On Friday, August 11, 2017, CraveThePain (18)By person wrote:

    Thank you!

  • Kaiser Black On Wednesday, August 9, 2017, Kaiser Black (1238)By person wrote:

    Only took you six lines you get a powerful message across. That's pretty amazing. Well done.

  • CraveThePain On Friday, August 11, 2017, CraveThePain (18)By person wrote:

    Thanks so much for your feedback!

  • worm On Wednesday, August 9, 2017, worm (1436)By person wrote:

    welcome to DP! I can feel the loss and anguish... nicely penned! ~worm~

  • CraveThePain On Friday, August 11, 2017, CraveThePain (18)By person wrote:

    Thanks worm!

  • Lux On Wednesday, August 9, 2017, Lux (291)By person wrote:

    Bullets in loaded guns, love. I can't believe how deep I felt this one.

  • CraveThePain On Friday, August 11, 2017, CraveThePain (18)By person wrote:

    I'm so happy to hear it made you feel something...that's all any poet really wants:)

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