By RetalicD

Broken branches,
of a tree...
fuzzy, faces...
unclear to me.

Painfully imprinted.
genetically strand.
tracing illusions...
alone being banned!
Helplessly hoping a final breath ?
timorously taunting wishing for death!

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Copyright 2017 RetalicD
Published on Friday, August 11, 2017.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • Riverfalls On Saturday, September 23, 2017, Riverfalls (1)By person wrote:

    It conjures up images of a patient dying in an empty room beautiful piece.

  • Bornfrompain On Monday, August 14, 2017, Bornfrompain (511)By person wrote:

    Exceptional pen! - BFP

  • worm On Saturday, August 12, 2017, worm (1552)By person wrote:

    nicely penned! ~worm~

  • Kaiser Black On Saturday, August 12, 2017, Kaiser Black (1404)By person wrote:

    I've always admired writers that can bring forth such emotion from shorter writes. That first stanza hits like a truck and doesn't let up. Well written.

  • RetalicD On Friday, August 11, 2017, RetalicD (14)By person wrote:

    i truly feel flattered ... thank you !

  • lupus tenebrae On Friday, August 11, 2017, lupus tenebrae (1027)By person wrote:

    A verbose, yet raw-knit quilt with an almost fractured cadence, the rhythm was seamless and I liked the use of ellipses to create pause, giving more weight to each line. Well written, please, enjoy your stay. Scholar

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