days after

By MyFeetInTheDarkness

Where is the light?
I used to hold it,
grabbed onto it.
Did I lose it?
Or did it just fade away?
Surrounded by darkness!
Am I or is it?
 

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Copyright 2017 MyFeetInTheDarkness
Published on Wednesday, October 11, 2017.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • worm On Friday, October 13, 2017, worm (1552)By person wrote:

    welcome to DP! we always need new blood here... it keeps us old guys on our toes! this was an interesting piece... Welcome! ~worm~

  • Just Dave On Wednesday, October 11, 2017, Just Dave (381)By person wrote:

    Short, sweet and has meaning. Very nice. JD

  • Mute Serenade On Wednesday, October 11, 2017, Mute Serenade (528)By person wrote:

    I second the welcome! This is a great little write... Short and sweet, and as señor jackal exclaimed, there is beauty in the minor manic tone this carries with it. Look forward to seeing you around! -Sue

  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, October 11, 2017, carlosjackal (2206)By person wrote:

    I like the manic and desperate feel to this and that the title begs a story waiting to be told.Welcome to DP!

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