By LunaFlower

I'm right, everyone else is wrong
Put up a fight, it's a pleasure to tag along
Mama said, you shouldn't stay up this long
Correct me if I'm wrong

Fresh blades, making fire on my arms
Popping pills, getting a rush from my self harm
I'm a disgusting pig, bred and raised on an abusive farm
Go ahead and raise the alarm

The only way out
The way you can figure out what your life's about
A positive way
To get through the day
I've been on my back, but i swear someday you'll pay
I'm a victim of suicide
I'm a victim of suicide

Life sucks, all is so pointless now
Mind fucks, you did so well you should take a bow
You raped my soul, and I think we all know how
And you took up all my time, more than I would allow

The way to let go
It's salvation when you know it's your time to go
I feel so alive, but that has to end
The way to deal with things when you're feeling low
I'm a victim of suicide
I'm a victim of suicide.

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Copyright 2017 LunaFlower
Published on Monday, April 17, 2017.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Lyrics"

Author's Note:

Forgive this song, I just feel extremely shitty today. I had to get it out.
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  • Gray Vision On Monday, April 24, 2017, Gray Vision (502)By person wrote:

    I've lost two friends to many to suicide so much so that I had to write on it too. It's been a long time since I've had a work take my mind back to that point in time, when what you expressed here felt fresh. Anyhow thank you for the share and take care of yourself.

  • Commander_Cadaver On Saturday, April 22, 2017, Commander_Cadaver (191)By person wrote:

    Nice write. Very relatable and intense.

  • Queazenart On Monday, April 17, 2017, Queazenart (265)By person wrote:

    No need to be forgiven! Life is shitty- Make something out of it! That's what got me writing in the first place. Anyways, great piece. It made me chuckle a little, it made me think a bit, it has balls enough to not beat around the bush on a really, REALLY serious subject. It's very negative in theme, but it's good to air out all the bad shit sometimes. Also, stanza 4 felt real and bitter. Good stuff. Hope you have a better day today!

  • LunaFlower On Monday, April 17, 2017, LunaFlower (9)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much. I really appreciate the positive feedback.

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