The Broken Day

By molock

The Broken Day

I saw the promise of 
tomorrow,
in some far away
place...
Two suns in the
sunset,
and the end of 
the human race.


Right on time,
shadows move when
darkness chases the
light...
So I'll meet you on the
other side,
where angels
are given wings to 
fly...


Tomorrow we rebuild
love
burying sorrow,
while weaving circles
around the sun.


From the shambles of
Saturn,
we walk through the open 
gate.
Where the Phoenix rises
from out of the flickering
flames
....Only to carry the fire
across the broken day.


Right on time,
shadows move when
darkness chases the
light...
So I'll meet you on the 
other side,
where angels are given
wings to fly...


Tomorrow we rebuild
love
burying sorrw,
while weaving circles
around the sun....


 

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Copyright 2017 molock
Published on Friday, November 10, 2017.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • Kaiser Black On Sunday, November 12, 2017, Kaiser Black (1331)By person wrote:

    This is incredible Mo. Glad to see you back and churning out those gems again.

  • molock On Monday, November 13, 2017, molock (304)By person wrote:

    thanks it's good to be back, i'm glad that to see you here doin' your thing as well .talk to ya later brother - peace - m0

  • Rebs On Saturday, November 11, 2017, Rebs (839)By person wrote:

    The last stanza really ties this lovely write up in a beautiful bow. That being said, the photograph is what really grabbed my attention. I absolutely adore the reds and the breathtaking fire. Very nicely done, darlin'. Rebs:).

  • molock On Monday, November 13, 2017, molock (304)By person wrote:

    thanks for the kind words Rebs, i looked at dozens of images i knew this was the one as soon as i saw it. peace brother - m0

  • Lazarus Ominous On Saturday, November 11, 2017, Lazarus Ominous (134)By person wrote:

    Beautifully written and brilliantly executed! Lazarus Ominous

  • molock On Monday, November 13, 2017, molock (304)By person wrote:

    thank you so much for reading and commenting i'm glad you liked it peace Laz - m0

  • dwells On Saturday, November 11, 2017, dwells (5452)By person wrote:

    A man after my own radioactive heart. Welcome back my friend and too bad too many never had the "duck and cover" exercise drills in school. Do we really think that tactical nukes won't usher-in their big brothers I wonder? Write on and cheers! Dan

  • molock On Monday, November 13, 2017, molock (304)By person wrote:

    your comments always put a smile on my face dwells. i still watch those videos on youtube i get a kick out of them. God bless my brother - m0

  • Drea On Saturday, November 11, 2017, Drea (1329)By person wrote:

    I've missed your words. Missed the lyrical way you write. This was hopeful, but it also breaks my heart. Write on. Hopefully it helps, sir.

  • molock On Monday, November 13, 2017, molock (304)By person wrote:

    thank you Drea your always so kind. you will always be one of my favorites here. i agree this a heartbreaking subject, humanity has so much more to offer. later sis - m0

  • worm On Saturday, November 11, 2017, worm (1586)By person wrote:

    I like the hopeful stance of this piece... Kudos! ~worm~

  • Bornfrompain On Friday, November 10, 2017, Bornfrompain (460)By person wrote:

    Beautifully written!! - BFP

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