unspoken honesty

By KittyStryker

i'll see you at that party
saturday night
with all
the cool

we could sit on the couch
with last year's romance

we could make out
and pretend
we're having a good time

we could
go home together

wake up
and tell the usual
white lies
of "i'll call you"
and "we should hook up again"

we can
like it meant something


like we know
each other's

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Copyright 2004 Bast
Published on Sunday, February 29, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Ravenblade On Friday, March 5, 2004, Ravenblade (334)By person wrote:

    I've known simliar situations and feelings so many times, loved it and keep it up

  • WinterGrave On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, WinterGrave (271)By person wrote:

    well done, most enjoyable read.~~~Grave

  • Jonas On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, Jonas (768)By person wrote:

    well written... me liked. i know your name. ;-)

  • KittyStryker On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, KittyStryker (736)By person wrote:

    ::giggle and kiss::

  • Alanarchy On Monday, March 1, 2004, Alanarchy (1137)By person wrote:

    Whoa... this one stings. I can relate to this. Good one.

  • Lynaes On Monday, March 1, 2004, Lynaes (879)By person wrote:

    Awesome work, I loved it. ~L

  • Emptyness Inside Me On Monday, March 1, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (175)By person wrote:

    I find this piece very true in modern time nowadays, great write ~Emptyness~

  • Jaded Jezzabelle On Monday, March 1, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle (332)By person wrote:

    I really got something out of this...thanks...you made me really think about my behavior of late.....jaded

  • capt_funguy On Monday, March 1, 2004, capt_funguy (807)By person wrote:

    great ending ... great overall ..... simple and sad thought overlay - cool clarity ... funguy

  • Solace On Monday, March 1, 2004, Solace (1075)By person wrote:

    I love drifters comment... My friend, who happens to be male, just got put through this, i despise the mentality behind one night stands nowadays...

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Monday, March 1, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (345)By person wrote:

    i think the titles says it all...i like this piece...-l-

  • A former member wrote: Funny how man is buckles under his standards in the face of uncertainty and lonliness.+T.P.U+

  • Drifter On Sunday, February 29, 2004, Drifter (278)By person wrote:

    sure, it's a date.

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